Feedback on final cut

good
good use of editing techniques - blurred vision
Good use of effects on shots
Good description of character on introduction
Good use of sound
Different ways of showing lost identity
Good use of camera angles
Very nice camera shots/angles
Good convention of identity with information of character lose of memory also with hand held shots and canted angles
Use of music added with effects
Video effects set the scene well
Good titles "word things" were good
Good editing
Good use of camera angles
Good video effects
Conventions of identity
The credits were original and how they mixed with the words was good
Good blurred shots
Really liked the use of definitions leading up to the title
Thought the sound went well with the narrative and added to the atmosphere
Good use of props as the audience asks questions
Sound track created suspense and unease
Ticking clock very effective as creates suspense
Disorientated effect was very effective
bad
Could improve on soundtrack to get a feel of disorientation
Strange cut in the middle
Don't really understand it
Abrupt change wasn't very good
Maybe fade out before the end
Main title was a little unclear
Titles could be clearer
Ending is odd
Credits not very dynamic
Include more varied shots
More camera work could have been used